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good perspective work
And I'm not gonna ask how you did the shading so well, for this is a review on Newgrounds

CamomilaXD responds:

for the shading i just trusted the process :)

Nice posing and water texture, though the walk cycle feels a little to normal for this guy
I got the impression he's a jittery ball of energy, even with the hand stand in this post, all of the body parts are moved on different frames.
It's a really cool touch but the effect falls apart when the character then move normally for a specific action. though I shouldn't be to critical, walk cycles are hard and you at least made one that reads well.

jumpbreak96 responds:

animation speedruned, was More showcase of environment

Is the blue arrow person a eel or a snake?
what ever it is, i like how goofy they look

Phoxphorus responds:

In my head they're some kind of vaguely reptile/chameleon kind of creature with the many swirls in their design.
And thank you! I like their strange look too :D

I like how soft and simple this is

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Ok then, this better very unsettling

OH MY!!!
You know when something is well written when you can tell there were multiple drafts.
Can't say much else since I got to use the burst of motivation i got from reading this puppy.

Foxmosis responds:

That’s some high praise, thank you so much!!

I really like how you used shape language here.

I like how you did the shading here, though you should try to be more consistent with the line arts thickness, the tiny line art at the fuzzy part of the hat look off compared to all the thick lines that surround them.
But I think you done this really well, Charlie Brown actually looks like they're in the environment which is surprisingly hard to get right.

This is really cool, I like how expressive you made them without showing to much.
Does the hair covering their eyes act like a visor and it stays in place to be pulled up and down
Or do they have to consistently pull their hair up to see fully?

TheShammah responds:

thank you very much. she just keeps it down over her eyes, not really caring about adjusting it to see

Good Day, Good Day
I'm a person who has something dumb things happening in their cranium that's gotta be shown.
Give me any criticism you want to share but don't just give me death threats
BE NICE!
hope you have a nice day :D

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