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I like how you've done the line art, but I do think you should draw the characters legs.
Avoiding drawing legs will only make it harder to learn how to draw legs in the first place.
other then that I'd say this work is well done.

And the thumbnail for this piece while scrolling on the portal is comedically misleading (ᗒ ᗨᗕ)

TXIFUN responds:

thank you!! Yeah I got a little lazy with this one since I drew it in the middle of my classes lol but I'm planning to draw fullbodies again very soon

Harleys got a fun design, good luck with whatever you're doing my friend

Emeraldthenobody responds:

I will, and I'm glad you like Harley

Teal seems like a nice bloke, though I thought they weren't a guy for a sec
I'm curious on what "the strike" you referred to is meant to be, I haven't heard of any so was it an internet thing or a real world thing?
you don't have to say specifics

ClicheAveri responds:

Recently a global strike was called to boycott any company currently supporting Israel in their genocide against Palestine.

She looks super energetic, Good work

CamomilaXD responds:

It's "he" actually, but thx :))

I like the premise and the character designs
though there isn't enough content yet for me to critique the story and character all that much
I don't think the introduction to the premise to be all that interesting, it revels a bit much what happened.
having a mystery is better then know everything at first
(unless you're setting up another mystery for the story and the premise isn't meant to be the whole show :P)

OnceHere responds:

Mystery isn't really my goal because I want the readers to focus more on the character's adventures rather than what has happened in the past, so I just let the readers know what happened :)

I do plan on putting some mysteries later in the story, however :D

that face at the end, it's going in my repository of cool faces in drawings i like because it's so cool.
I have no idea whats up thou, I Assume the lack of information is intentional

psych0dude responds:

glad you liked it and yes it was intentional

I don't know what Discord Rich presence are meant to be but these are pretty cool
on the piece on colour you should have the purples for both purple guys be different so it doesn't look like they're both the same guy and on the followed piece, the top hat is so big that it looks like shadow Freddy has a big forehead.
but with all of these I can still see a consistent charm with all of them and that matters a lot.
This is good stuff

ClicheAveri responds:

Wow! Thank you for the constructive criticism! The Color Piece was definitely an oversight, as the two were actually different colors! But when I turned saturation on to the max, they both ended up looking very similar. As for Followed, I actually totally understand that. Definitely should've messed with the hat proportions a bit more.

Also, Discord Rich Presence is basically what your status shows on Discord. Like what song you are playing for example. And these icons 'should' be shown with it! (LEX3X posted a whole bunch of them on Twitter after Ourple Guy's release, but for some reason didn't give these songs in particular one)

last year wasn't that bad... was it?

Taytonium responds:

i suppose not; it did have a lot of good parts to balance things out. but i guess it all depends on who you are and what you did and went through. i’m glad you’re stayin positive about it

good perspective work
And I'm not gonna ask how you did the shading so well, for this is a review on Newgrounds

CamomilaXD responds:

for the shading i just trusted the process :)

Nice posing and water texture, though the walk cycle feels a little to normal for this guy
I got the impression he's a jittery ball of energy, even with the hand stand in this post, all of the body parts are moved on different frames.
It's a really cool touch but the effect falls apart when the character then move normally for a specific action. though I shouldn't be to critical, walk cycles are hard and you at least made one that reads well.

jumpbreak96 responds:

animation speedruned, was More showcase of environment

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I'm a person who has something dumb things happening in their cranium that's gotta be shown.
Give me any criticism you want to share but don't just give me death threats
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